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DBZ - Illustration - Grown up under ruins

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Again the Tschoken laughed and his cronies mocked me with a thoughtful look. Also, the amount around us seemed to mock me as well. Deep and unstoppable. As already mentioned. I was not particularly popular among Freezers people and they never let out an opportunity of showing me this as well.

"What is this? A gift from your `friends`?"

Surprised, I looked into the grinning face of my adversary and followed his gaze. And understood.

The silvery little box had to be well-liked by my fall from my pocket, because now it was inevitably a few feet in front of me.

I swallowed hard, my eyes wide, startled.

"Seems to be pretty important, judging by your face. It would be a shame if it would somehow, broken. Do you not think so? "

Again the cronies roared and I understood. I realized but I was too slow.

His foot jumped out and I just heard a loud crunch. Nothing more was seen of the silver box. Nothing more than broken silver. The rotton must on the ground was the only thing that cheered me up in a long time.....

Here was the hard-won possessions of my fellowship....
Here was a part of my home....
Part from my childhood....
The little what was left from my home.

Trampled.....to the ground.

Shocked I crumpled to the ground and could not look away.

The crowd around us erupted in laughter and inside I wondered why Freezers guards did not intervene. Maybe it was too amusing and Freezer probably need this type of entertainment. From somewhere in the lizard seemed well just watch and I needed not even batting an eyelid to realize it, that his wild grin was not only to find his eyes.

"Poor Ouji ..... kneeling on the floor because of a box of candy. How far your bungling people just dropped. "

And with these words the Tschoken spat right in front of me and at that moment the world around me was black with rage.

From somewhere I could hear Nappa's desperate plea. I still felt a heavy breeze as my mentor dashed out from behind to grab me by the arm, trying to avoid something worse, but my attack was faster.

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So that was the little reading exampel so far :)
You´d see... life under Freezer was not really an easy task for Vegeta. Not at all ._.
The silvery box taht got finaly destroied by one of Freezers soldiers was a gift Nappa and Radditz gaved our here young prince to his one and only Radagask. Radagask is an old Saiyan tradition of being an adult finaly.
As we all known well, Vegeta was take away to Freezers ship while he was jsut 5 years old. And I already wondered myself, how was the life under the cruel enemie?!?

Now we have a lil spotlight... not that good at all. :/

Grown up under ruins - is a lil side project by me and is written down as Fanfiction. I´m sry it´s already in german, I try my best to translate that lil reading example here ( but still there are mistakes. I´m really sorry for that....)

So anyway... hope you like it so far :)
More will follow for sure.

Yours Red
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ItzzJak's avatar
where can I read it??